Ok, so this is my 2nd attempt on making something industrial. I've been fascinated with the style/movement since I first saw it Anyways, I just wanted to make a simple lovely shape like a star, and turn it into a "metal" piece made out of polymer clay I tried to incorporate some of the critics ppl told me in my last steampunk piece. So thank you so much for the help, and I hope you'll like this one
Increible! Me gusta mucho la cantidad de cosas que puedes hacer con tus materiales, no escatimas en originalidad ni en esfuerzo, relmente puedes ver el tiempo y esfuerzo invertido en tus piezas. Eres de las mejores artistas manuales que conozco, y esta es una de tus mejores piezas, en mi opinion es admirable que hayas adaptado las criticas que te dieron en trabajos anteriores de una manera tan puntual y correcta.
La pieza en si me parece extremadamente bien realizada, impecable. La apariencia de metal se logra bien, el contraste entre tonos es muy bueno y las texturas -sutiles- son agradables y aportan a la pieza. Eso y todo, se ve muy linda y origianal.
Muy buen trabajo, se nota tu progreso en cada pieza!
This little star is absolutely adorable. I love the way that you have made the clay look like metal with all of the little holes poked into it. And the layers really do make it look like it is made from bits of scrap. the gears add a very nice touch to it. And the little bar that looks like it is holding the 2 sides together is really clever.
The only things that seem out of place on it, is that spring, is sticks out a little to much for my tastes, and the slight imprint of the gear on one of the points. I don't know if that was an accident or intentional and I probably wouldn't notice it if I was to see it in real life but looking at this picture, my eyes snap right to it.
I really enjoy this piece though, keep up the good work!
La pieza en si me parece extremadamente bien realizada, impecable. La apariencia de metal se logra bien, el contraste entre tonos es muy bueno y las texturas -sutiles- son agradables y aportan a la pieza. Eso y todo, se ve muy linda y origianal.
Muy buen trabajo, se nota tu progreso en cada pieza!
The only things that seem out of place on it, is that spring, is sticks out a little to much for my tastes, and the slight imprint of the gear on one of the points. I don't know if that was an accident or intentional and I probably wouldn't notice it if I was to see it in real life but looking at this picture, my eyes snap right to it.
I really enjoy this piece though, keep up the good work!
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