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Hi^^

AVAILABLE AT MY ETSY: [link]

Ok, so this is my 2nd attempt on making something industrial. I've been fascinated with the style/movement since I first saw it :heart: Anyways, I just wanted to make a simple lovely shape like a star, and turn it into a "metal" piece made out of polymer clay :aww:
I tried to incorporate some of the critics ppl told me in my last steampunk piece. So thank you so much for the help, and I hope you'll like this one :D

My 1st attempt: [link]

Please I would really like to know what you think of it :heart: so comments and/or tips are always welcome ;)

Made with:
-Studio by sculpey
-gears
-love and patience

**If you'd like to buy a piece like this one, please just let me know I'll be glad to make one for you - send me a note :blowkiss:*

Critiques


:iconbluealhena:
Increible! Me gusta mucho la cantidad de cosas que puedes hacer con tus materiales, no escatimas en originalidad ni en esfuerzo, relmente puedes ver el tiempo y esfuerzo invertido en tus piezas. Eres de las mejores artistas manuales que conozco, y esta es una de tus mejores piezas, en mi opinion es admirable que hayas adaptado las criticas que te dieron en trabajos anteriores de una manera tan puntual y correcta.

La pieza en si me parece extremadamente bien realizada, impecable. La apariencia de metal se logra bien, el contraste entre tonos es muy bueno y las texturas -sutiles- son agradables y aportan a la pieza. Eso y todo, se ve muy linda y origianal.

Muy buen trabajo, se nota tu progreso en cada pieza!
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6 out of 6 deviants thought this was fair.

:iconnekoyasha-:
This little star is absolutely adorable. I love the way that you have made the clay look like metal with all of the little holes poked into it. And the layers really do make it look like it is made from bits of scrap. the gears add a very nice touch to it. And the little bar that looks like it is holding the 2 sides together is really clever.

The only things that seem out of place on it, is that spring, is sticks out a little to much for my tastes, and the slight imprint of the gear on one of the points. I don't know if that was an accident or intentional and I probably wouldn't notice it if I was to see it in real life but looking at this picture, my eyes snap right to it.

I really enjoy this piece though, keep up the good work!
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:iconkikz91:
that's awesum!

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:iconmeririm:
I like it a lot. It's both cute and intricate and has a very nice design.
:iconirisrashap:
wow, i really like it.
It's so beautiful :]
:iconcolourful-blossom:
thanks :hug:

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:iconcolourful-blossom:
thank you so much! :heart: i'm very glad you liked it :aww:

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:heart: Visit my lovely etsy shop [link]
where everything is under $30 bucks! ^_^
:icongiorgos93:
This is just awesome! Very good idea to start new steampunk shapes! :D :D

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Sloorp for PiXELS
Awesomeness>>
:iconseed-of-january:
muy bien :D
that's awesome and I like the imprints you used :D that's what I was talking about
I :heart: it
the only thing I could imagine now is using some dark patina on the silver parts - that would be cool :D

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Dogs have owners - cats have staff :giggle:
What part of "MEOW" don't you get?
:iconsayurividel:
wow!! it´s so cool!!
:iconsasukesadork:
This is awesome! i adore the steampunk style <3

How much would you sell something like this?

Also, about how big is it? It's hard to tell dimensions on a picture like this...

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just like a crow chasing a butterfly..
:iconluzbella:
Ohhhh, esta pieza me fascina! Y como naturalmente es más angular, se ve muy bien con las placas metálicas. Y ese resortito le quedó bonito XD

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Apr 13, 2009, 2:15:27 AM

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